In this Mini-Masterclass,Mr. Ken McDonald teaches how to create vibrant characters through physical description. Using an excerpt from “Of Mice And Men”,the characters George and Lennie are introduced. The passage highlights the use of adjectives to define George and compares Lennie to a bear, emphasizing his size and strength. Repetition and asyndeton are employed for clear details and a faster pace. The lesson concludes by emphasizing the effectiveness of these techniques in character portrayal.
在这节 MiniMasterclass中，麦当劳老师教授如何通过对身体描述的生动写作ea给读者创造出生动的角色。这节课引用《人鼠之间》的摘录，介绍了George和ennie这两个角色。这段文字强调了如何使用形容词来描述George,并将Lennie比作一只熊，突出它的体型和力量。采用重复和省略连词的写作手法来获得清晰的细节和更快的节奏。本课程最后强调了这些写作技巧在人物刻画中的有效性。